Carl_S Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Its a small one for kids - only 50k words. I am very chuffed. and smug. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyP Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Wow, congratulations. It's something I've always wanted to try but I don't think I've got the talent. Wel done. All you've got to do now is get it published. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted November 30, 2007 Author Share Posted November 30, 2007 Thanks man, if anyone wants to have a read from here and is willing to give some constructive feedback drop me a PM. I think ill have a go at publishers got nothing to loose but postage and humble pie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jamesmark Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 How many times did you mention "love" and "Supra"? Seriously well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted November 30, 2007 Author Share Posted November 30, 2007 love .... I checked... 41 times in 51000 words. Supra = 0 times. Thanks Mark. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Supragal Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Cool. I used to write short sotries all the time when I was younger. I found a load the other day while clearning up, they were quite good actually! What is yours about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
colsoop Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Title, whats it about ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juanchan Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 It may take you an entire thread on its own, but get it up for us all to enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoff Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 Well done mate. Thats quite an achievement:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mathew Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 did it end with ''.........he woke up and he realised it was all a dream'' i think every story i wrote in school ended like that lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted November 30, 2007 Author Share Posted November 30, 2007 hehehe, no it doesn't end with that "it was all a dream thing" I know i would feel cheated if i read something like that. but its called "All Adults Die" and its about school kids who discover a spell to send teachers to sleep. Unfortunately they send the whole adult population to sleep by mistake. It's their journey to make everything right again and have fun. I'll try and host it somewhere so you can all enjoy it (or be bored by it). Carl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ewen Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 "All Adults Die" Seriously ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
juanchan Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 As a kids book, I'd re-think the title! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mathew Posted November 30, 2007 Share Posted November 30, 2007 altho i think kids these days would be intrigued by that title and defo buy it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted December 1, 2007 Author Share Posted December 1, 2007 Yeah, I'm not sold on the title, but It's intriguing. I have other ideas for titles, but the story is more important. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted December 1, 2007 Author Share Posted December 1, 2007 Yeah, I'm not sold on the title, but It's intriguing. I have other ideas for titles, but the story is more important. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MrRalphMan Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 You gonna let any of us read it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
turbonut Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 love .... I checked... 41 times in 51000 words. Supra = 0 times. Thanks Mark. Swap it around and I'll give you the benefit of my [mostly worthless] opinion :D Lxxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RedM Posted December 1, 2007 Share Posted December 1, 2007 but its called "All Adults Die" and its about school kids who discover a spell to send teachers to sleep. Are you sure it's a spell and not one of JamesMark's posts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carl_S Posted December 2, 2007 Author Share Posted December 2, 2007 lol, just have to spell correct it and correct for readability then ill host it or something. thanks for your support guys. hope to have it ready for monday. Carl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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